Porshca,I like the suspenseful music you decided to use. That was a great choice! I did notice a few typos, their should be there in a few sentences. I hope I helped give you some helpful advice. Also, I like the book you used. Classic!
Porshca,
ReplyDeleteI like the suspenseful music you decided to use. That was a great choice! I did notice a few typos, their should be there in a few sentences. I hope I helped give you some helpful advice. Also, I like the book you used. Classic!